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Hi, Susan,

We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.  We’d like to invitee you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We’ll gather at the Students’ Club at 8 p.m. this Friday, after the evening classes. And it’s going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we’ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games. It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be. I’m sure you’ll have a good time at the party, too.

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范文中運(yùn)用一些常見短語would like to 想要做某事；keep quiet保持安靜；have a good time玩得愉快。When he comes, we’ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him.這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用when引導(dǎo)的狀語從句；It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be.這個(gè)句子it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式，how引導(dǎo)是see的賓語從句。