答案

Dear Li Ping,

I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones.

As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing.

There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.

Best wishes.

Lin Tao

解析

試題分析：現(xiàn)在，很多中學(xué)生每天長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用耳機(jī)聽音樂、學(xué)英語。你的英語筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來信中提到感覺頭痛、注意力不集中、記憶力減退。請(qǐng)你就此回信談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和建議。

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