【答案解析】

A Beautiful Place in China

March 19, 2021

By Li Jin

Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.

Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and color1 ful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.

I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.

【分析】本篇書面表達屬于說明文，要求給英文網站《最美中華》欄目投稿，介紹介紹一個國內你喜歡或去過的地方。

【詳解】第一步：審題

體裁：說明文

時態： 一般現在時

結構：總分法

第一段是文章的總起段，說明四川省有很多著名的景點；第二段介紹景點九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分說明你對該地方的印象和感受。

要求：

1. 說明四川省有很多著名的景點

①四川的地理位置：中國西南部

②著名景點：九寨溝、都江堰灌溉工程

2. 介紹景點九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程

① 九寨溝是自然保護區

②給人印象最深的層層疊疊的瀑布和五顏六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀動植物

③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，現在仍然起著灌溉作用

3.  你對該地方的印象和感受：九寨溝的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造會讓你驚嘆

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by

第三步：連詞成句

(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.

(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.

(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.

(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and color1 ful lakes.

(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.

(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.

(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.

(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.

(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.

(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.

根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表遞進關系：what is more

2.表轉折關系：however

3.表示列舉：such as, like

【點睛】[高分句型1]

What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and color1 ful lakes.（what引導的主語從句）

[高分句型2]

Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.（現在分詞作狀語）